Allo
First of all, good job with your gesture and good to notice that you are having fun with gesture.
If I do have one word on your gesture drawing, I think you are trying to get every detail of the pose which is good but not the main point of gesture drawing. Like @snakker said, try to find interest/strong/elegant lines that DEFINE the pose/action itself.
Another minor stuff to say which I also suffer atm is line economy as it looks like you scribbling. Unless it's what you want it that way, it's preferable to keep a clean line economy (e.g. max 10 lines for 30 sec gesture) and just worry about key line.
But looks good so far and good luck!
Here it is my room using 1 point-perspective, I took so many references from pinterest and this is like a vision of my dream room simple but with a lot of space and comfy.
I'm really happy with the result and I never thought I'd be capable of doing something in perspective before, for a first try I'm very proud on how it turn out