Sebastian - Art Journey

[mau.wamp]

With feedback loop I mean that you design your drawing practise in a way that allows you to spot your mistakes quickly. By noticing these mistakes you can specifically work on those mistakes to get better.
An example of a very basic feedback loop would be:
1. you are practising drawing straight lines
2. after doing 5-10 lines freehand you grab a ruler and check if your lines are actually straight or not
3. then you identify what kind of mistakes you made (are the lines curving? Do they miss the end point? Etc.)
4. after identifying your mistake you try again, focusing on doing the exercise differently in order to get a better result.
5. and repeat that process until you are satisfied with what you get.

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[Da_Bingus]

Oki now i understund ! I will definitely do that! Thank you

[Da_Bingus]

Thank you! I try very hard to make them look good

[Da_Bingus]

Did 100 circles and 20 heads again but this time did 10 heads up but I have some problems because the chin seems a bit big and the circle looks good any tips on that?

[Da_Bingus]

[Da_Bingus]

did extra 14 heads where I drew everything by hand let me know if the circles look better or if I should focus on them some more

Also, I think I may have fixed the issue with the chin I think I just drew the bottom line (or nose line*) too low but I'm still not sure so I will just wait for feedback

[Da_Bingus]

[Da_Bingus]

Also tomorrow I will start the 250 cylinder challenge from drawabox wish me luck lol

[LesleyCarol]

Sorry, I have to keep this brief.
1. When things are in perspective thy get smaller. So when considering things cut in half, the half in the back needs to be shorter than the half in the front.
2. Try tracing circles to get a better idea of how they should be and to train your muscle memory.
3. I wouldn't try to do extreme angles like this until you learn more about perspective and creating forms. The angle in the reference is different from what you drew. Over time you'll develop better sensitivity to how forms rotate in space.
When doing extreme angles you have to really think about each part in it's basic form and how the lines wrap around these forms. Then think about that they look like from the bottom and top. Once you do more one and two point perspective assignments this will get easier.

1. Be careful with the lines of the facial features. You're unable to see the hair line at this angle, so you should only have two lines wrapping around. I almost made the same mistake when correcting these.
   Also also, try to keep the lines close to the same distance. The bottom part is longer but not by that much.
   
   I really suggest tracing these forms over real faces and the 3-D model.

Hope this helps!

[Da_Bingus]

Thank you so much! this is very helpful!

1. Yes i see i will work on that tomorrow

2. Regarding the circles i started tracing perfect circles since yesterday and it helped me a lot i just didn't post any drawings

3. i didnt mean to go for the tilt in the reference its just that its hard to rotate the 3d model to look straight so thats why the reference was a bit tilted what i was aiming for was the head that looks up. i will try again tomorrow to draw the head looking up since you showed me how to draw it but this time i will use correct reference

[Da_Bingus]

Did warmups some circles and now I did 10 heads will go for 40 heads today and also will start 250 cylinder challenge

Also I started to feel comfortable drawing circles that's why the heads are gonna be drawn by hand

[Da_Bingus]

[Da_Bingus]

Did 40 heads in total today felt really good about them ... here is some heads looking up (I know I was told to give up on them but I'm stubborn ) let me know if they work did them in a slightly less extreme angle now, I will start with the 250 cylinder challenge and tomorrow I will do some heads looking up again and will focus on head looking down wish me luck

[Da_Bingus]

[Da_Bingus]

Today was my first day at work I'm tired but still, I'm gonna try my best to draw for like 3 hours lol did my first 10 heads

[Da_Bingus]

[Da_Bingus]

did 10 more looking up i dont have the strength to do more so I think I will just do like 10 cylinders and go to sleep

[Da_Bingus]

[Da_Bingus]

Hey its ya boi back from work drawing lol did the usual warmups and 10 heads looking up

[Da_Bingus]