There it is! This actually doesn't look that bad. I love the way you added the highlight on the tip of the nose and the values are in the right places. Also when you compare your study from almost a week ago they're night and day.
I would try to draw the lines lighter or erasing them before you start shading.
Also really look at the reference and draw what you see and not what you think is there. The top of the lip has two points sticking out, but are they really that long and straight? Try to ask yourself these kinds of questions when doing studies.
This is really great to see!