Not bad, the characters proportions all look reasonable, and the outfit looks viable.
I can point to two things that brings up very often in the streams that you should think about. First, lets see the hero shape! Make sure you have it with the image when you submit it for a stream, he really wants people to be putting that to use.
Second, there is not much in the way of repeating shapes to create a sense of unity in the character. An obvious candidate would be to replicate the design on the necklace onto the other points of gold, and to consider using the shield shape on other parts of her outfit as well.
Keep at it, lets see some more!