Mar '19

Hey @francesco_campagnola not sure if this helps since I'm just about to start term 5 but to me the first thing that sticks out to me is the Half spheres on the characters side (that is the only thing that is using that specific gray color and pattern.) also the gold stands out to much because of its detail (in comparison to the characters clothing below the waste (Gold vs Faded Yellow on clothing)

Hope this helps :smile:

Mar '19

Thanks! I appreciate you took the time! The half spheres are supposed to be shields of her kingdom, as mage she doesn't have much use for them but she carries them anyway as a badge of honor and loyalty and if things get rough she can use them as a defense mechanism with telekinesis, about the colors I need to learn more about how to use them properly I'll probably change the faded yellow on the fabric. Thanks again for your help!

Mar '19

Not bad, the characters proportions all look reasonable, and the outfit looks viable.

I can point to two things that brings up very often in the streams that you should think about. First, lets see the hero shape! Make sure you have it with the image when you submit it for a stream, he really wants people to be putting that to use.

Second, there is not much in the way of repeating shapes to create a sense of unity in the character. An obvious candidate would be to replicate the design on the necklace onto the other points of gold, and to consider using the shield shape on other parts of her outfit as well.

Keep at it, lets see some more!