Hello fellow students :blush:

I am The Dancing Tabaxi - a hobby artist and my dream is to start publishing my webcomic(s).

I came here from Marc's Youtube Art School, when the weekly videos just weren't enough anymore :wink:

I am still struggling with mainting a drawing/studying schedule and am overall shit at posting, but I am making a forum hoping this will motivate me to post more often :joy:

To start - here is one of my pieces that I recently drew for a DND campaign and I am still kinda happy with it:

Hello @The_Dancing_Tabaxi!

First of all, nice work! I like what you're going for with it. You can feel the warmth of the sun and the smell of the sea. I also like how it seems like we just landed on that beach and now came across this guy. It's up to our imagination to figure out what comes next!

With that out of the way, I think I have a few suggestions. Some are things that might need correction and others are more ideas for you to consider.

So first thing is the anatomy, mostly small things on the arms. The way you connected the shoulders to the arm is actually not quite right. The deltoid connect behind the bicep and then the pectoral muscles go under the deltoid. So with this arm postion we would see the pectoral muscle wrap over the arm instead of under. And also the connection at the elbow on the arm on the right seems a bit thin. It might end up looking like this.

Next would be the lighting and shading. You have a few inconsistencies, with the big one being the character's cast shadow not going in the right direction. With the sun behind, the shadow should come towards us. And since the sun is also relatively low, it should fairly long and stretched out. Also you could play around with darkening the character since the sun is behind him, which would put his front side in shadows. And then you can use the bounce light of the sand (warm from the bottom) and the ambient light of the sky (cool from the top) to shade him) along with a rim light from the sun light. That might help make him pop even more.

Also, you have fairly defined shading while the rest is softer. Unfortunately this has the effect of calling attention to the clouds. Softening the shading on the clouds and strengthening the one on the character would put the focus back on the character. Personnally I like to keep the lights on the clouds more defined and soften them in the shadows, but you may have different taste. So maybe a bit like this would be the result.

The last thing is more about possible ideas more than ''corrections'' and it falls into the realm of composition. But first thing I want to mention about it, is that the fact that your character is almost centered, but not quite and it bothers me more than it should :laughing: I had a teacher telling us that if you're going to do something, do it all the way. If you're going to center the character, make it dead center. If you want to have it off center then make it really off center. So that's what I'd do with him.

Anyway! So you have all this space around the character and I feel like there's something to be done with it to add more to the piece in terms of setting, story and interest. I'm not sure exactly what it could be and it depends on what you want to tell. I do see a hint of it with what seems like a pyramid hidden in the forest far on the right but I feel like theres a way to make more. Maybe it's adding things in the environment. Maybe a boat on the beach that indicate that this character is back from fishing or from a journey on the sea? A group of character silhouettes farther away to indicate that there's more people living here? Some tools scattered around? Crabs walking on the beach? It's up to you, but there's potential to do something really cool. You already have something nice :smile:

Anyway, I think that's enough. I hope this helps and it's not too overwhelming. I got carried away a bit, haha! Keep up the good work and I look forward to see more :+1:

Welcome :smile: Ur drawing looks very nice although i think the anatomy is a bit off :smile: Cant rlly tell u what exactly is wrong since im only on term 2 :confused: keep it up tho!

4 months later

Thank you for your reply! I definitely have some anatomy issues as Cedricgo has pointed out :sweat_smile: Also thank you so much for your kind words, wish you a good art journey as well :smile:

Omigosh, thank you so much for your very comprehensive critique :open_mouth:
I did not expect anyone would take so much time to critique my piece and I really appreciate it.

I knew the anatomy was wonky, so thank you for pointing out exactly what is wrong, because, by god, I couldn't figure it out by myself :sweat_smile:
The chest area makes so much sense once I saw it on your picture and I can't believe I gave him such a skinny right arm - and didn't notice.

And the shading - I just wanted to put a sun flare on the sky and I didn't think how that would affect the shading on the character.
That's very insightful and something I will keep in mind next time I draw a character on an actual background.

I agree that the background is very plain - I usually don't draw them at all, that's why this was already an actual achievement for me :joy:
But I like your ideas on how I could push it further!

"I hope this helps and it's not too overwhelming. I got carried away a bit, haha!"

Not at all, thank you so much!!! I appreciate it!
I really like how much you upgraded my character on the drawing you corrected.

Like I said in my first post, I am a shy/shitty poster and I am just sorry it took me this long to reply back to you :tired_face: