Pretty cool drawing Tony, I see some potential in you.
Yeaa I felt the lip kinda weird too. Maybe try blend lip and skin colour a little bit to not feel too edgy unless your objective is with lipstick then no need. The Oral commissures are asymmetrical too (Right side hook up, but left side does not hook up). The upper lip tubercles maybe brighten up and small V shape at the top maybe.
Here is my attempt, not the best but appealing to me. Hope it help u out brother.