White Devil challange - perspective issues

[mustacheberry]

I missed the last weeks challange so I figured I'll give this one a try but I also (for whatever reason) wanted to make it more challenging to myself and picked a harder perspective... and now its biting me in the a*s x) (the legs are messed up for sure and I don't know what to do with them).

So please point out all the mistakes you can see here.

[karidyas]

Well one thing I notice is the belly button is way too low. It looks only slightly low compared to the muscles, but way way too low when compared to the crotch and hips. So from this I can infer that the hips are too high. I don't really know enough to be able to fix it myself, but it's all about relations.

I recently found a really useful tool for working out poses and body perspective etc, it's called DesignDoll and it's completely free - the pro licence just lets you export as .obj and import models from some website. As long as it's used as a learning tool and not a crutch, I think it could be really useful and powerful!

[stealcase]

I tried to see what needed to be done about the legs. I think the right thigh (my right) should be more underneath her, right now her thigh gap looks a little unnatural from this angle. I moved the legs slightly compared to their current position, so that she maybe stood a little firmer on the ground (the perspective might still be off, was hard to determine vanishing points based on the anatomy because the hip looks like it's too far up.) Looks like you were afraid of moving the left leg out of the frame.
Also note the drapery going around the illiac crest and continuing down her thigh, converging near her crotch. The cylindrical form of the shape doesn't match the perspective imo.

Love the face rendering on this tho.
Edit;
Decided that I didn't like what i did well enough, so I just plotted down this based on what I understand from the perspective of your image.

It's very stiff, but it gets the point across.

[windhydra]

I think there should be more overlapping due to the angle, like the chest should block the upper abdomen, and the knee cap should block the upper part of lower legs. Added shadows to make the edge more obvious.

[mustacheberry]

Thank you for the advices, I messed with the values and perspective, I tried to keep the legs in the flame but I think it wont work out.. I feel like the ribcage is the hardest part and how to show it right under this angle.