May '20

Hi.

I like the image a lot :smile:
The perspective is really nice, I like the lighting as well.

12 days later

May '20

Well done!

I have 2 things that merit correction.

One is that the flowers in the foreground are not showing any perspective as the hill slopes towards us.

The other is the nasty tangent on with the tower on the left and the draw bridge, both of those features are really great (I especially love the bridge design, simple yet interesting, way to go). Just make sure to separate them out. What I sketched out isn't quite correct because the perspective is off from the move, but that's the idea is there.

It might also be nice to see some more of the cathedral in the background there, but that's more of an artistic choice. Just try upping the blacks on that layer and see what happens, or if you have an atmosphere layer just turn it down some.

I sketched over those things, I hope it helps. Good image!

May '20

Thank you alot! I was so unhappy with the foreground and you show me the answer! :smile:
The other tips are also really important to me. I really appreciate it.

May '20

Always happy to help, and feel send me a message or just mention with @PeterH if you are ever looking for help.

15 days later

May '20

I have reworked my painting. Thanks @PeterH for your hints. Now i'm happy with my finished painting.