Any suggestion/improvement for this piece?

[Zabiier]

[nkirill]

Yes. Overall the idea is nice, but you definitely need to work on your art fundamentals. Human face is one of the most complex things to draw, so you have to be aware that if your skills do not correspond your ideas, you've gotta learn. Right now this pic shows a lack of understanding of major forms e.g. sphere, cylinder and cube and how light and shadow makes the forms dimensional. I've got a 5 min overpaint just to show the direction you may take on this picture.

[nkirill]

[Zabiier]

wow! Thank you for taking your time in doing the overpainting, it's actually really helpful for me. It's a fact that I lack of some art fundamentals, since I'm a young artist and side faces are one of my biggest struggles. Thank you for the advice, time to work on some studies haha ^ ^

[cedricgo]

I agree with nkirill. The idea is very nice, it just have some flaws in the execution. I don't know if it's what you did, but when drawing a character that has part of their body hidden (by her hair in this case) I'd recommend that you still draw the full body first so that everything attaches at the right place and that everything looks right.

All that will come with time and practice, so don't feel too let down either if can't make everything as nice as you imagine in your head yet. Just keep it up!

[Zabiier]

Thank you for the advices too! Related with what you said, i tried to do it (attached photo below) but maybe kind of messed it up in the process. Anyways, time to work on this anatomy haha