Hi! New comer here, and pretty new to CG, but I thought I would give this a try for the experience. This is what I have got going so far. I am not super happy with the torso area, I was going for a long lean look, but it isn't looking quite right to me yet. Any ideas or input would be so great, thanks! I haven't decided if it'll be sci-fi or fantasy yet, shell be holding a staff or long bow type weapon in her hand, which is sort of going fantasy, I guess.

Another action sketch just to show a bit more of the feel I'm going for. I'm going to work on some more head options for my warrior woman, I'm vacillating between the alien concept that I started out with, or just a regular human. I'll try a few sketches of both to share, and hopefully get some opinions! I'd sure appreciate that!
I know I'm not that good at this yet, I've only been doing this for a couple months and I've only got Photoshop 8, which is very old. No curves or masks available! So please, any tips would be great. I've learned a lot from youtube tutorials so far, but it's been a pretty steep learning curve!

11 days later

Well, here is a little bit more finished sketch of what my final picture might look like. I'm planning a rather better background, I hope. Something nautical, steampunk, with a little wider perspective.
Any ideas/advice would be appreciated! Everyone on here is doing really great work! I'm a little nervous about how to lay it all out to look right/professional. But, it's all a learning experience, so should be fun!

Hi, super rough bad sketch here, but hoping for at least one bit of feed back. I'm not sure which composition to go with, which looks better, more dynamic? Any ideas?

8 days later

Here is one of the previous poses with a bit (I think) better background. Hope to get some feedback soon so I can feel more sure about how to get going on my final good copy. I would sure appreciate it!

Lovely pieces! I love seeing people who are not afraid to start from scratch, because 9 out 10 times it helps the image immensely, plus you as an artist get more practice in which is always great :smile:

As to your questions from here.
I know how discouraging it can be, my first attempts over at the old forums went similarly and honestly, getting ignored is easily one of the worst thing for artist motivation that can happen :pensive: . As to "why", there are multiple reasons that I know.
First off, I've noticed in the monthiles over here, the first few weeks people get a lot of replies, but at later weeks, everyone starts working hard on their pieces and not so many people go around commenting. It's often the first impression that makes a topic popular or not and if you don't get noticed from the begging, it can be harder later.

Secondly, people like commenting on what they like. That means that a professional artist with years of practice will always get far more comments that someone still learning (even though they need it the least).

Thirdly, it's a big forum. The topics are updated constantly and with such a flood of new content, it's hard to get noticed easily.

So what can you do?
Here's what I did anyway: Go around and start commenting on topics. That's it. Not the topics that have dozens of replies, but the ones like yourself, with little or no attention (and believe me, you are not the only one struggling with getting noticed). And don't just comment "Nice pic", but try to make a reasonable critique, exactly what you would like to see.
Some of those people will in turn check your topic out, write a critique themselves. After a while, people will start to recognize you as a part of the community and be interested in your work because of you.

At least that worked for me :smile: (it even made me a mod! haha)
Hope that helps at least a little bit (:

(I've wanted to write a short critique, but this took much longer than expected, so I'll have to add it later.)

You would have to grey scale this entire scene first (you have a month), then work on the values of what you want read most.
An example the two figures the rest of the scene fade into the distance.
I am not a concept artist i know though that values matter always. (grey/gray scale)

What i see now is that you probably went straight into colors and lights/dark's which results in this looking really dark with some spots of color in it.

I see the girl and everything though it would be super cool to be able to read this much easier (for the eyes).

It's not bad just can be better, as for attacking scene pose, i wouldn't know how to help, i usually look up dynamic stuff of even get a screenshot from a movie that is popular and mimic that battle scenario that fits what you are making.

That is all i got best of luck.

Thanks so much for the reply! I was figuring all those things were probably in part to blame, but of course, constantly second guessing everything! I have been trying to do just that, commenting on others works, hopefully it will slowly come together, if I have enough patience! Lol :smile:

Hi! Thank you for the reply and ideas. Yes, I didn't do any under painting, that's a newer concept to me even in my usual acrylic medium, and I really had no realization that it might help with CG! Always something new, lol. I will definitely be giving that a try starting today.
Thank you again, it means a LOT to have some feedback.
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No worries i know how it is when you don't get much, that is just the way it is.

Best of luck glad you are from another background and trying something new, just take your time obviously, bunch of info out there on the world wide web. :smile:

Hopefully someone who knows more about these processes can come around some time to help, other than just chatting on a popular thread...

Working on that grey scale drawing. I just wanted to share how it's going. The first one is without a search light on her, the second has one. I'll have to keep going before I can figure out which will look better. I'll also have to get the new photoshop, Photoshop 8 does not have curves or masks or feathering edges, so that's why my search lights look so dumb! lol

Any ideas to improve would be gladly accepted!