It's not about us liking it, mate
But maybe you could try to clothe the girl for a colder weather? Maybe give her a fur coat and have the fur resemble the shoulder things of the princess? And these ice shards that are now on the summoner, imho, they should only be there when she's summoning.
You should keep the older design and post the new one in another reply, that way you can keep a backlog of the things you went through. Also, it won't be as confusing for someone who hasn't seen your thread before to look through it.