ART WAR | 2D | Nashtar | Rgdraw

[thefro3po]

Composition is coming along nicely.
The eye contact from both the horse and Nashtar in additioin to the pointing sword direct the viewers eye to the person on the ground and back.

It creates a triangle or sorts and directs and redirects the eye, keeping it inside the picture. Good stuff!
Love seeing other artists work process. Can't wait for your next update.

[rgdraw]

Thanks a lot! Glad it reads well, it was a tough one
Next updates soon !

[rgdraw]

New update ! Did few colors correction on her face, and started rendering the helmet and armor, and slowly adding the design elements!

[mr_dessin]

Really cool searches and composition man

I just have few things to suggest, if that's ok for sure !
Her right hand (the one which hold the horse reins (not sure about this one "les renes du cheval si tu préfères ") shouldn't be back to the horse head, or at least a little, no ?

But the one that bothers me the most is... if we compare her 2 arms, her left one (with the sword) looks 2 times shorter than the other (about).

Hope it helps !

Maybe I guess, you're still in the making-process ?
Keep it up

[Steve_Kim]

Awesome progress! I agree with @mr_dessin about HER left arm looking a bit tiny. Im pretty sure you will address these later on, but looks like a lot more foreshortening will be required to pull that angle off

[mr_dessin]

Haha yeah you're right @Steve_Kim just corrected that !
I don't even know my reverse left and right arrrgh

[Steve_Kim]

@mr_dessin no, you said it correctly i pretty much said exactly what you said haha I think i just caps locked HER to make it clear for me to write the feedback lol

[rgdraw]

@mr_dessin @Steve_Kim
Thanks you're both right! I haven't corrected that after repositiong the whole thing and i may forget about it later so thanks for the reminder
And yes the hand holding the "thing-i-forgot-the-name-too" is supposed to go behind the horse head
Thanks again guys !

[mr_dessin]

No problem man
Good luck !

[JasonNguyen]

This is looking great so far! Keep it up!

[malcom]

This is looking really cool so far. Really liking the colors and composition. Keep up the good work.

[rgdraw]

@JasonNguyen Thanks a lot dude! I was actually planning to ask you advices on facebook like 2min before I see you join the contest x)

@malcom Thank you very much !

[sheyenne]

Wow, that are pretty cool. I like the second one.

[rgdraw]

Thanks a lot !

[Iago_Cavalcante]

Great work!

[rgdraw]

Thank you !

[mar_cynwer]

This is looking cool, I like the light falling on her.
The horse is most likely a work in progress, but I would suggest to add armouring to it too, to better reflect that it is a knights horse. You could also try to make it like the horse is rearing, though I don't know how it would work with the pointing sword.

(And I have to mention, Nastar was an old arcade game featuring barbarian heroes, known in Japan as Rastan Saga)

[rgdraw]

Thanks a lot !
I'm still not sure for the horse, i want to put on armor on him, but i'm afraid it would be too much for the illustration, too many details and not enough rest area
And also the horse is meant for travel mostly, not for battle, so maybe he's gonna have something more but not a full armor

(Really ? I didn't know that, that's pretty cool )

[HorizonDweller]

Awesome progress

[rgdraw]

Thanks man