Everyone thank you so much for your help.
I have created a new sketch taking everything into account but I changed the initial perspective I couldnt handle that angle.
I brought back the helmet and payed attention to the movement. Also I think I managed to bring back that godly feeling maybe some color dodge will help. I will push the expression a bit as well. i am sorry for not replying properly to everyone I need to catch some sleep
Also I created that twitter account thats mandatory I think for the contest. I would like to add anyone that is an active member of cubebrush so please follow me or send me your twitter.
Heres my twitter https://twitter.com/kalymniou
Again thanks for all the feedback it really helped me