ART WAR | 2D | Suntsiezina | Mr_Dessin

mr_dessin 2017-02-02 21:13:17 UTC #41

Re-reading the contest FAQ...I'm not really sure if a bad/evil champion is really allowed here... (or in the place of the antagonist only).

So I'm changing Tanezika into a better character.
Hope I could show something soon.

And I really need to hurry ! Time goes really fast ^^'

rgdraw 2017-02-02 22:37:00 UTC #42

I think you can do an evil character, I've seen demons and devil character so I'm pretty sur you go for it

mr_dessin 2017-02-02 22:46:28 UTC #43

Sure thing I have seen this too ^^
Maybe the biggest problem I have is that I don't feel confortable to do evil character...Or my ideas can't fit with an evil character...

I'm sketching a lot right now
I need at least 10 designs to have some choice.
Right now close to 3... well I'm gonna not sleep tonight or just a little haha

rgdraw 2017-02-02 22:54:41 UTC #44

Oh well then if you're not comfortable with it, then yeah change direction.
Good luck !!

mr_dessin 2017-02-03 18:49:42 UTC #45

My favourites lean to J, K, N & P. I refined a little more J, but I prefer the sketch haha - will try detailing a lot more (and maybe those legs are too thin)).
Also like (but they need some more refining) D, E, H, I, M & O.

Your opinion guys & gals ?

yuushin7 2017-02-03 19:37:09 UTC #46

This character definitely has more interesting presence then the other one :3
I like the J one too, other that that... I liked N

mr_dessin 2017-02-03 19:45:36 UTC #47

Yeah that's certainly what I've missed a lot previously - something epic Plus I really wanted to do some mechs !!!
Haha that's funny because I'm doing N at the moment ^^

But I like K a lot too, P is maybe a bit too heavy.
Thanks for the feedback !

Did you make your decisions for your Zepllin, Tank & Composition ?

yuushin7 2017-02-03 21:45:06 UTC #48

I'll have some compositions out tomorrow, I'll be mostly developing A - the one you couldn't tell whats going on on it xD and D maybe...

rgdraw 2017-02-03 23:26:18 UTC #49

Good luck for the choice, they all looks really epic !

mr_dessin 2017-02-04 00:47:20 UTC #50

Good luck for your composition @yuushin7 !

Thank you @rgdraw
I think I'm taking #N for now...if I don't change my mind in the meantime

New code name for now : Nervaz.
I prefer the yellow and blue one, but I certainly will do lot more.

Otherwise I don't like that shoulder pad canon nor the legs...will detail it another day.

Pat_Boiteux 2017-02-04 02:03:21 UTC #51

Fantastic progress on the character! I like the new interesting silhouette of the design Of the color choices I'm liking the blue and orange/yellow, and also the green and yellow. They are a nice contrast. Loving the exploration, go team sci fi!

petrovod 2017-02-04 09:27:21 UTC #52

Hi , you did a great piece of work - it's very cool. The transformation process is very interesting

petrovod 2017-02-04 09:30:53 UTC #53

I like this character! She looks cool

mr_dessin 2017-02-04 09:46:58 UTC #54

Wow @Pat_Boiteux & @petrovod thanks a lot !!!
Really like your support and feedback guys !

I'm not very sure about my orange/grey (nor the green)...but like I said I need to dig the colour a bit more - but first, refining that Nervaz armor onto the level 02

Just hope I can show you some progress in the week-end.

rgdraw 2017-02-04 10:38:37 UTC #55

Really nice! The colors are so cool, I vote for the 4th one !

mr_dessin 2017-02-04 14:57:57 UTC #56

Why you like so much my orange, it's bad, no ? I mean I don't think that's the good orange yet
Anyways, here is my new armor level 02.

Will try (if I have time) tomorrow to do lot more colour schemes than previously, with a better render.
Yeah I'm asking maybe too much ^^'

Pat_Boiteux 2017-02-07 06:07:27 UTC #57

Very nice updated concept sketch! I like the direction of multiple arms, lots of opportunity there for great gestures. For a bit of feedback, have you thought of asymmetrical elements in the armor design?

mr_dessin 2017-02-07 07:14:55 UTC #58

Thanks @Pat_Boiteux and also for the feedback !

In some ways I have the feeling that my #Nervaz-01 was better than the second... (because of a little asymetrical aspect with the shoulder pads and simpler design & more readable maybe ?)
What I still don't like in that design is certainly the legs...
For the moment I really think my design is "clunky".

Yesterday I was trying to put on some colours but couldn't because of all these little things that said me everytime in my mind : "man, this is odd here...and here...oh noooo...this is so bad "

I really need to test and think "shapes" in few design and choose again...just hope that won't take too much time, again

ambre 2017-02-07 07:58:02 UTC #59

encore un français !! =D

ambre 2017-02-07 08:00:22 UTC #60

très intéressant ton travail , ya une bonne dynamique de formes , cool cool cool =D
bon courage pour la suite