ART WAR 3 | 2D | Heroes | Dejhanae | rgdraw

[rgdraw]

Here's today's progress, worked on the hero (but I have to correct some stuff regarding gravity and clothing but I'm an idiot xD )

[rgdraw]

Did some corrections this morning based on the perspective of the elements and little stuff, added some little sparks too to show a hint of her superpower

[rgdraw]

For this afternoon the theme was leaf! " Be the leaf! " (+50points to the one who get the reference! ) And that's it for today, gonna continue tomorrow!

[rgdraw]

Just some little updates on the background nothing much, and I hope you're having a great weekend

[mr_dessin]

Maybe try to make the white sheet float, more, above her thigh ?
It was looking better with her knee uncovered, but that's just maybe me ^^

Keep it up and have a good sunday !

[rgdraw]

Maybe but it didn't make sense perspective wise, that's why I changed that, she's not straight on the branch, she's about to "fall" on her enemy, so the fabric don't fall on her knee but towards the ground
(I hope it makes sense, somehow it's hard to find the rights words today xD )

[mr_dessin]

The wind exists, no ? ^^

[benoit-duverneuil]

Nice job too ! You'r putting in some work
I love your oranges work ! the only issue for me in here is the green of the cape, there is only here on the image where we find it. For example we have some traces of purple on the foliage which can refer to the purple of the FG character (which is nice !) If it was only me i would try another corresponding color like a variation of the red belt or a brownish red like the foots of the animal (I forgot the English translation ^^')
Another thing is that the main character is less contrasted than the rest of the BG, you should try to let him in the shadow, it's cool and makes her more a hunter that if she was standing on the light like an idiot xD, but you definitely should try some big hitting lights on her side !

[rgdraw]

Wind, what is that thing ? XD
I'll think about the wind, but if I add wind, that's gonna change many things and not just that little part

[mr_dessin]

Sorry, I sure always like to complicate myself and others T-T
Please don't hear what I'm saying...it's usually bad...

[rgdraw]

THank you very much!!!
I'll try to work on the green part then, now you've said it it's the only thing I see now xD
it's a red panda or firefox (Mais c'est panda roux en français )
And yeah there's still a lot of work on that character, I was focusing on the background lately, but what you're saying makes sense, and I'm gonna try to think about that!

[rgdraw]

Yeah you do like to complicate things (But mostly for yourself!) xD

[mr_dessin]

Probably...and you can't even imagine how it is hard for me to simplify my stuffs............I think I was a robot in another life xD

[rgdraw]

Simplyfing things is the most complex things to do if that can makes you feel better
The more something is easy to use/understand, the more complex it is (computers for exemple, in comparison to what they were before, you had to know how to code to be able to use one, and now kids use those stuf so easily )
So it's just practice, and it will come naturally ! It's still hard even for me, you've seen all the compositions tests I've made to get to this one and it can still be improve I'm sure

[rgdraw]

Here's today's progress, mostly worked on all the little details, and made some adjustments in the lightings, toned down the green of the cape, do you feel like it works better now ? or is too much and now we don't see anything? @benoit-duverneuil @mr_dessin

[engineered]

Your heroes look very lovely! and I like that bright autumn colors in background

[rgdraw]

Thank you so much!!

[Tesat]

Nitpicking here, the leaves behind your character up in the top left corner have too sharp edges tone down the sharpness a bit. Also try playing with some atmospheric effects maybe add some fog or something. I forgot to tell this before and idk if you have time for changes but if you can depict the spear already thrown at the enemy while it's still mid air, that would really ad more depth. Otherwise i like where this is going

[rgdraw]

Oh! You're totally right: I didn't even realized it! I probably was too zoomed in when I painted that part! I'll correct it
I put fog already, but I can't really add more than that, or that would be weird, the weather is quite sunny, but I'll do my best to separate the layers a bit more and give enough depth to this

[Tesat]

Now I see it, I focused on the upper part too much that I missed that it's foggy down below