Dec '18

It's a good start. I love the idea and the fact that she appears to be part human still as well. I would say watch your anatomical proportions and really study some machinery to add more believability to your piece before you move into your final.

Dec '18

oh man thanks, you are right , guess I rushed a little bit without taking any solid reference, this should take me on the road

Dec '18

Nice start! Don't forget the yellow vest!

Dec '18

And here is the colored version , and the story. Irene a.k.a NGINE is an underground superhero that uses her ability of machine manipulation/creation , to give life to all of her inventions and create any kind of gadgets out of anything she can find . She believes machines are alive, because herself is part machine , that helps her adapt more easily to any tech

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Dec '18

here are some thumbnails for the final ilustratiion , I could really use some advice, I am just an amateur in all of these

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Dec '18

I like the bottom middle (junkyard) only because it seems like your champion is actually fighting there. It makes for a more interesting scene. I would consider making her take up more space in the final though, because she is the focus and you really want to show off what she can do. Watch super hero movies for some good fight pose ideas. Hope this helps.