really nice greeny blues in the pipes :3

ayy! ty! :3 were gonna make it!

Heeeelll yea to that car :DDD

were gonna make it, buddy! :smiley:

woo hoo! thanks! glad im going in the right direction now! <3

Something I didn't saw but...the left character, where is he looking at ? (also maybe his left thigh is a little too big in comparison of right one, no ?)

You're welcome and sure, this is really better : D

@mr_dessin hay thanks for the crit! i changed the thigh a bit, because it looks too big, even though its constructed correctly for the focal length. but if it looks wrong, it is wrong, right? xD

also, heres a peak at the stuff i rendered out today. im at a point where i just have to fire from the hip and trust my construction. the deadline is just looming ever closer. xD I BELIEVEEEE

looking good so far, I suggest you to show more of your character by making him and the civilians appear closer though

deal! thanks for the input. :smile:

Late to the thread here, but i am LOVING the amount of thought and ideation you're putting in. I do the same myself! The final composition is coming along very nicely! If you're looking for any sort of feedback, I'd say the main focal point (Nur) is being a bit lost with all the stuff behind him. That's my opinion at least, and it's nitpicky because I love what you have going on. :smile:

ayy. thanks @pencilequipped ! ill keep that in mind fosho! <3

also, i finally just crunched down my image and went berzerk on it. xD i was feeling pressed for time, because i have newyears/bday plans, so i just went nuts on this thing... then after the workday, i found out that the deadline was extended. lol. xD

This is looking so awesome!! I love the composition!

hahah I feel the same way, it's odd to have the opportunity to go back and make changes now the deadline is extended :stuck_out_tongue: I think I'm gonna stick with what I've got though; I'm gonna try my best to make an entry for the Artstation Nasa thingy and I know they aint gonna be extending :stuck_out_tongue:

looking awesome btw, red sky really sets the mood and the bright light of his shield does a great job of telling you what to look at.

awesome work and i like it composition

Looking really great and I do love the perspective work if I didn't say that before.

One thing that stands out in the current image is that the car does not really look like its interacting with the shield yet. Apologies if you just aren't there yet, but perhaps having the tire leave a golden interaction stream along where it is ramping off into the air along the shield.

Its looking really good, love the new layout.