ART WAR 3 | 2D | Heroes | The Forgotten Rah bitt King | TaloS - Forums

PeterH · Dec '18

Welcome to ArtWar!

I like how far you are pushing the proportions.

TaloS · Dec '18

Thanks a lot PeterH!

I try to reskin the design more like a Hero Design, before it was to much dark for the Hero theme, so, here it is:

TaloS · Dec '18

Im a bit lost, but ill try to do one of this composition designs, i like 1 and 2 , it tells a story.

What do you think? everything helps me to do it better! thanks a lot!

tck · Dec '18

just a lil composition crit, try and place Rah bit so he two thirds of the image, at the moment in 1,2 and 3 you could cut the image in half and basically see none of him in one of the halves.

As for the comps themselves, I love the stance in 2, maybe have a whole crowd of lil rabbits cheering him on

TaloS · Dec '18

Thanks Tck! ill try to combine the first two into one more. i love your idea, ill try to put some little bunnys too!!.
Here are the weapons for the Rah bitt lord:

TaloS · Dec '18

I have been doing the concept art for the design of the armor, and this was the result, i like the egiptian look of it:

TaloS · Dec '18

I try to do a color test with some values and volumes applying the design!!

Im loving it xD

What do you think guys!

TaloS · Dec '18

TaloS · Dec '18

I like this new fix for the final composition. ill be doing the 4.

i choose that because it has all the elements that i want to show you, to tell the story of Rah Bitt!!

TaloS · Dec '18

This is the result with details, tomorrow ill be doing a color test to begin with the final render

I hope you like it!

TaloS · Dec '18

I im defining the layers first then i start to polish every layer so then i merge it and start the final render.

This is my progress so far:

TaloS · Dec '18

mr_dessin · Dec '18

3rd was having more impact than 4th maybe ?
Good luck !

TaloS · Dec '18

This is the progres so far.

TaloS · Dec '18

@mr_dessin Yes! the third is more dynamic, but the fourth lets me show certain details of the design, which in the third could not show.

thank you very much and equally

mr_dessin · Dec '18

Oh yes I understand your concern...you're probably talking about the 80% appearance of our character...that is sure troublesome when we want to do something too much dynamic...
You're welcome and thank you !

TaloS · Dec '18

lets go to the background now !

TaloS · Dec '18

This is my progres so far, i almost finish i think, just rendering the details of the background.

TaloS · Dec '18

I can see certain problems with the contrast of the rabbit with respect to the background, or maybe the background is very bright.

If you see any detail that could improve, I would be very grateful!

Tomorrow I will continue to fix them. Thank you very much to all!

mr_dessin · Dec '18

Maybe put some fog so the background colours won't blend too much with your character.