Jan '19

your color choices are great!

Jan '19

This is starting to take shape! I feel like the fingers are a bit too bent inwards. It is feeling a bit stiff for some reason. I would take some photos of my hand and do a few more studies as the hand has become quite a big part of the composition as it is all the way in front. The forefinger is way to bent into the palm. I also think the palm is too flat I, I would not bend the wrist that intensely. If it was a bit more relaxed this would read really nicely. You want to use this as a leading line into the illustration (think about rolling a basketball down her right hand to her left).

Loving this and hope my feedback can help out :smile:

Jan '19

Thanks! yep i'l change hand in process. Didnt think about "rolling a basketball down" Its great idea! May be i l draw and a some "razengan" :DDD

Jan '19

I'm so impatient to see the finished piece! :smile:

Jan '19

I keep refreshing to see the update! 😀 Very excited

Jan '19
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@Acolet , hi! Can you see this topic. All good or i forget something. Thanks!
And i dsnt have a sumbit bottom :c

AcoletModerator
Jan '19

Hi! You did well, everything with your entry is all right :).

Jan '19

Amazing work on this one! It looks so cool! Congrats for finishing this! :smiley:

Jan '19

Nice style! congrats and good luck!

Jan '19

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teterten

Sad you didn't have enough time to finish it like you really wanted to...
But still a very nice piece !!!
Best of luck !