Great! Can't wait to see that! :smile:

Nice ! I really like the one on the left, she looks so badass :smile:

Yeah, gotta agree with rgdraw, that one on the left is pretty cool. I also dig the one in the middle, but that might not fit the cyber punk theme quite enough, thats more of just a normal street outfit combined with some tech angel.

true true, i had a pattern idea that was going more the CP later on and explore more of a hip thuggish look but from a pure linework perspective it falls a bit short, so thanks for the feedback on that! :smiley:

so i scrapped the last page and i started to narrow down the ones i enjoyed and tweaked them up a bit for more or less, still actively working on this page still so it subject to change in the future but im enjoying the direction its taking :smiley:

Still a big fan of the big left one, but I really like bottom right one, I guess I have a thing for ladies with wings and big weapon x)

And I forgot to say it but great work so far, all of these looks amazing :smile:

Thank you! :smiley:

Like the bottom right as well as that left one. I think its the addition of the popped/fluffy collar that sells the hip thug aspect.

It really leaves the one on the left feeling really unnatural in the middle (not a bad thing). Its a fun jarring effect that will elicit a double take.

Really like a lot the bottom right one too!

It's probably the most appealing, but the one on the left does look a lot more hardend thug-ish. The furr does make her wings less readable though.

Maybe integrate some furr and keep the weapon of the left one into the bottom right corner one?

so i fixed up the middle two abit and explored both of them in a exaggerated way, for the top one he's sapose to be on the full thug criminal route with guns and illegal tech and the bottom one is going more on the Greek angel side with some tech enhancements. As for the ones before, the left on took a back seat a bit, just little changes here and there, and same goes for the one on the right except i explored a bit more with fur coat idea and weapon a bit on the small thumbnails. Let me know your thoughts down below!

went ahead and just decide to pick the character on left and update and clean up some linework, probably tomorow or sunday i'll be moving to ethier the back of the character or color comps

Great choice! :smiley:
Well, they were all great so you couldn't go wrong, can't wait to see the next steps now!

Spent my sunday and Monday with these color comps, pretty confident in all of them but im probably going to spend tommorow ethier working on the back of the character, call outs and abilities and then choose one sometime in between! :smiley:

All are very nice. Are you leaning toward the large study on the left? I do like that one best.

Thank you :D, im a bit split on the one on the left, im looking more at the more colorful ones because they have more of that cyber punk vibe to them because of the bright neon colors they have on them

2 cents :smiley: - the red one has the strongest villain vibe, followed by the pink/purple one (which is the most cyberpunky. The dark blue feels a bit subdued compared to the other ones. The left/big one is the most balanced (and can be portrayed as a villain).
All are pretty awesome!

Nice process so far!
For the colors those 2 brightest ones look like heroes, not villains tbh.