ART WAR 3 | 2D | Villains | Fallen cyberpunk angel | Fris

rgdraw 2018-12-08 09:37:32 UTC #21

Great choice!
Well, they were all great so you couldn't go wrong, can't wait to see the next steps now!

Fris 2018-12-11 02:57:17 UTC #22

Spent my sunday and Monday with these color comps, pretty confident in all of them but im probably going to spend tommorow ethier working on the back of the character, call outs and abilities and then choose one sometime in between!

Fris 2018-12-11 02:57:41 UTC #23

rsanders 2018-12-11 04:14:03 UTC #24

All are very nice. Are you leaning toward the large study on the left? I do like that one best.

Fris 2018-12-11 06:17:59 UTC #25

Thank you :D, im a bit split on the one on the left, im looking more at the more colorful ones because they have more of that cyber punk vibe to them because of the bright neon colors they have on them

sparksofdawn 2018-12-11 07:39:42 UTC #26

2 cents - the red one has the strongest villain vibe, followed by the pink/purple one (which is the most cyberpunky. The dark blue feels a bit subdued compared to the other ones. The left/big one is the most balanced (and can be portrayed as a villain).
All are pretty awesome!

innocent 2018-12-11 08:35:46 UTC #27

In relation with your concept and mood boards, i'd say the pink winged one.

MarcinKulesza 2018-12-11 08:41:02 UTC #28

Nice process so far!
For the colors those 2 brightest ones look like heroes, not villains tbh.

rgdraw 2018-12-11 10:11:39 UTC #29

Like @innocent said! It's a great one!
I really love the black and white and gold on the left too, looks like a legendary skin to unlock later in the game

Fris 2018-12-11 18:07:16 UTC #30

@sparksofdawn @innocent @rgdraw Thanks for the feedback Im mostly likely going to go with the pink one because it has most of the elements you guys have been pointing out
@seekula the ones in the most white i wanted to capture more of the angel feel to the character with a bit of attitude, but since those kinda fall short on the direction of cyberpunk and villain as well, those were just kind of ideas up in the air, thanks for the feedback though!

veesketch 2018-12-11 23:02:37 UTC #31

I really like the one on the left but I'm also feeling the blue one on the bottom left! Maybe popping some of those colors a little more to the green side might make her feel more like a villain. I think the red one fits the stereotypical villain feel, if that's what you're going for though.

PeterH 2018-12-11 23:23:41 UTC #32

Little bit late for the comment, but yeah, gotta dig the pink/purple one, much more punk than the white ones which read as more noble.

Fris 2018-12-12 00:10:25 UTC #33

so a bit of change of plan on the call outs, i wanted to move to the composition shots first because im a bit rusty when it comes to them, so let me know which one works best for my illustration going forward, also thank you to everyone who gave me feedback on the last post, i ended up deciding the purple one going forward, seemed like the right pick i might touch up some things here and there for continuity sake

innocent 2018-12-12 09:59:05 UTC #34

Nice and natural stances, simple and smart scenery.
4, Because knuckles cracking is way too badass. Unfortunately she doesn't show any super. power.
1 is super fresh too, same remark about the superpower. Might be better with an enemy at the end of the spear.
5 is neat, again. This time she's flying, so using a superpower, and you can play a lot with the cityscape. I would either shrink the character or change the format so she isn't constrained by the frame.
Cheers.

rgdraw 2018-12-12 12:14:58 UTC #35

I second everything @innocent said!
You did a great job on these

mr_dessin 2018-12-12 12:16:06 UTC #36

Who knows maybe her wings could have superpowers : D (on 4th scenery, they already are glowy ^^ (at the tip), maybe they could electrocute or something ?).
6 could be interesting too !

Fris 2018-12-12 21:52:14 UTC #37

thanks for the feedback! I might tweak around a bit with #4 to show some type of superpower going on as @mr_dessin gave the idea becuase i agree it is a pretty badass pose going on would be a shame for it to fall short

katya_cyan 2018-12-13 00:07:55 UTC #38

Your compositions so cool! Most of all I like 2 and 3 ^-^

edenriquebq 2018-12-13 02:33:09 UTC #39

I like 3 and 5
Maybe have her raining some fire over the enemy?
even though flying is technically already a power

Love your comps! <3 Best of luck

Fris 2018-12-13 05:11:16 UTC #40

so bit of a busy day today, i was able to clear up the line work completely for the front of the character and start some progress on the back, also i was able to crunch in some vfx for the character so i can tweak or make some new compositions for the illustration