ART WAR 3 | 2D | Villains | Lucia Nox | stefankoidl

stefankoidl 2019-01-03 21:48:32 UTC #5

Thanks people!
I hope i can finish this on time.

Warm or cold Background?

katie-borkin 2019-01-03 22:06:24 UTC #6

Really like both, but the warm one does seem to add dimension to the background.

Tesat 2019-01-04 04:34:26 UTC #7

I think the warm background ads contrast and is close to the character so it draws the viewer's attention to her

rgdraw 2019-01-04 10:36:41 UTC #8

I hope you you time to finish too! It's too good to not be finished
Good luck!

mr_dessin 2019-01-04 11:44:36 UTC #9

Agreed with @katie-borkin & @tbrk , warm !

stefankoidl 2019-01-04 13:22:01 UTC #10

Thanks everyone! i continue with the warm bg.
About the design of her, what do you think works the best?
simple? or with fabric at the shoulders, or with some red fabric at the back?

aegilrod 2019-01-04 17:54:02 UTC #11

Nice! you are making quick progress so I'd say you'll be making it in time for sure.
I personally prefer her with uncovered shoulders, and maybe with the straps at the back.
Keep it up!

stefankoidl 2019-01-04 19:02:06 UTC #12

Thanks aeguilord, im continuing with nr1
Just a quick update:
Anybody some improvment ideas?

rgdraw 2019-01-04 19:08:50 UTC #13

Looks great! Nothing to add to that!
Just gonna letting you continue detail it :3

aegilrod 2019-01-04 20:21:37 UTC #14

Maybe push the background dudes more into the distance for more breathing space between the left background guy, her and the foreground one?
And more agony in their expressions

Viktoriya 2019-01-04 20:32:44 UTC #15

I think you need to draw in more detail the armor in the foreground. And some kind of magic in the girl hand.

stefankoidl 2019-01-05 11:29:31 UTC #16

Can someone help me out here?
Im totaly unsure about the diretion i should go with.

mr_dessin 2019-01-05 11:51:05 UTC #17

3 (like the golden ornament crown around her head) or 5 maybe ?
Honestly whatever you choose it will be great, no doubt !

Agreed with @Viktoriya about magic in her hand ^^

stefankoidl 2019-01-07 19:48:58 UTC #18

Quick update,

Anybody got some ideas how to improve this?

granfaloon 2019-01-07 23:29:34 UTC #19

This looks amazing I really like the whole thing, you could spend some more time on detailing or refining some brush strokes (magic swirl i.e.) That is if you think you can/should spend more time on the piece.

Keep it up!

stefankoidl 2019-01-09 20:35:09 UTC #20

Well time is nearly over so i created the concept sheet, anybody got some ideas how to improve this conept file?

chemsem 2019-01-09 20:40:44 UTC #21

This looks a lot better than any old concept sheet. the painterly style to your colors just makes your idea more visibly tangible. They stated in their brief to include as much of your creative process as possible as well so you can always include some small images of your previous samples (those at the beginning of your blog). Kudos!
-Joel

anilduyalbaydir 2019-01-09 20:45:03 UTC #22

I'll suggest more details and saturation colors on the focus points. Very good soo far!

aegilrod 2019-01-10 18:20:56 UTC #23

Nice!
As for the concept sheet, there's been some previous finalists with rather simple concept sheets, so I wouldn't stress too much over it.
Good luck!

stefankoidl 2019-01-10 20:27:32 UTC #24

Thanks everyone!
Well nearly finished, is there anything you would point out that i should continue working on?