Creepy design, really fits with the villains side ^^ For the proportions, I think the face and feet correspond to an adult, rather than a child, thus it feels like an adult with short limbs, I'd increase the eye size a bit and definetely make the feet smaller. Good luck!

Wow sweet line work and shading on those sketches, works very well with the theme. interested to see the style progress

Nice and creepy! I'm looking forward to see how you'll develop this character. It could be really cool :smile:

i think the first one is pretty good on the idea of a demon child, the 2nd is a bit to forward and doesn't leave to much up for the imagination and becomes kind of generic. but on that note i think maybe adding some small demon horns poking out and some satanic tattoos or marking around he cloths or body would really help sell the idea that she falling into this "dark" side, hope this helps, great job :smiley:

These just too many posts! They get buried so quickly!

But I agree with Fris, those are some pretty spot on observations.

The one that you colored a bit is a really fun layout, I rather like it.

Super sad and terryfying at once !
Nice concepts and character sheet.