ART WAR | 3D | Dameana | Sci-Fi | Zyp (DC)

[zyp]

Updated: Changed things to get away from someone else's updates...

2days: (update, thought it over.)
Probably out of this, have fun all the time frame vs. prizes and possibility of placing don't add up, good luck hopefully you all don't waste any time and think it over.
Might change my mind we'll just have to wait and see, but as it stands it seems i'm gathering too much from those around me and it's put me off this, yet again, whoopdido.

[grigouips]

Looks fine man ! Thanks for the answer !
I would love to see more sharpen edges on the legs and, really @zyp i imagine the head without the "ponytail" and i find it better. Less original but better silhouette.

Looking forward for next post !

[Grimmrobe]

I think the shape / contours of the suit at the front make her boobies look kind of far apart and... wibbley. The shape doesn't seem to conform to what I understand the underlying anatomy to be. Could be why it looks off to you.... ?

(Checking you original concept... that design for the front of her suit looks great)

[glubglubz]

I figured I'd pay you the same courtesy you payed me.

Just some recommendations to get her closer to the body types you had in your references.
Hope this is is helpful.

[zyp]

@grigouips
Thanks, yea if i continue i'll remove it since it doesn't work out so well, i did like it though, oh well i guess. (this is why i have to learn more of what looks good to the viewer rather than what i like, even if it doesn't necessarily work out..)

@Grimmrobe
Yea i was being silly and actually making it realistic to the proportions of the body, so she was actually wearing the suit and i didn't just mold the suit to the outline but extruding and creating a clothing and armor... silly i know, now i know better.

@glubglubz
Yea the ponytail doesn't seem to be a popular addition, i did my best to 1:1 the visual critique which is what i'd like to believe every person entering into the challenge would love to get as a response, (especially a "3d modeler".)
I for one have no words for how awesome and appreciative i am of this kind of help glub freaking amazing response and super helpful feedback.
Just letting it be known i did utilize it and it did not go to waste, though i suspect my word will do in this response if i no longer update the thread.

I tip my hat to you sir, you are very rare indeed, super cool and talented when i saw this visual aid i was like how'd you do that?!. ( 1st thought Looks a bit like tracer, ha odd how that came about.)

Thanks, likers & C&cers.