C & C response:
Ah well thanks for the critics and comments i'll work on that for sure. This isn't going to be 1:1 I should have mentioned that it was just to get a basic idea down.
Need as much help as I can get as far as direction goes so i do appreciate your C&C and anyone else who shares some helpful info.
Did a couple of days before hand of referencing before making this sketch/doodle. Granted my drawing is rough as it gets but the top half of an idea is there.
Progression:
I decided to make actual shots of progression for both the concept and the current sculpt shots.
Female base was made first, then posed base to draw concept, then made helmet, using extrude, zremesh, clay polish, repeat.
So how i plan to tackle this is work on one thing at a time, so helmet gets all the love till we/I am happy with it, then torso, then arms, then pelvic, then legs, then weapons/accessories.(I am keeping the weapons and shielding and bootsers)
I know this isn't actually the way to do things i want to engage community feedback.
^This hopefully with Community feedback, which is stated in the rules, so i hope to have more thrown my way. 
Thanks again Av.
Down with fantasy j/k I played for both teams, but i only got 1 robot design, 1 female on my portfolio and had fun with them and wanted to see if I can make anything better than those.
