Thanks for the kind words you guys!
Here's an update. Mostly just figuring out colors/light, adding details, and separating elements. Her head looks a little large, so I'll be shrinking that down tonight along with her left forearm. That'll make it so I can actually bring the hand in the way I'm imagining it. I want to get the little tweaks out of the way before I start really rendering so it doesn't slow me down later.
Feel free to critique at any point as well