Well I haven't checked you for a while. It certainly look clearer right now, good job for that !
I think by your sketches that she is supposed to fly in a storm, but right now I have the impression that she is sliding in a cloud ?
But the overall scene is really cool, the cat in a really nice touch
You have so many light sources, this in going to be quite a challenge to make it work perfectly
Keep up the good work 