Dec '19

Dude, you've gotten WAY better since last year!!! Good job :+1:

Perhaps instead of the normal diamond pattern on the sword you could try the lightning icon. It might fit in with the rest of the sci-fi elements you already have.

Also, it seems like there's something missing on the waist area. Maybe a leather strap or a rope belt to hold the pouches on? Just a thought...

Keep it up!

Dec '19

Reply to

glubglubz

Thanks a lot! Good to see you again this year,and yes i will probably use the lightning icon. Also i thought the belt would hold the pouches but i might have to emphasize that somethings holding them with a strap

Dec '19

Reply to

Tesat

Looks great so far and the idea is really exciting!
About the swords: Does she fight with both of them or is the other one just a backup?

Dec '19

Thank you! I put both designs up there just to have options to pick from, one has a traditional hilt and the other one has a sci-fi look to it

Dec '19

I see! Both look great but personally I prefer the more sci - fi one since it matches more with the rest of the designs.
Really excited to see how it's gonna turn out!

Dec '19

thanks, and yes the sci fi design for the hilt suits it better

Jan '20

Finally found your topic! Pretty cool idea! Curious to see more! :smiley:

Jan '20

I'm in the thumbnail stage for the illustration, I'll post soon when I clean it up a little more :smile:

Jan '20

thanks :smile: I like your thread as well

Jan '20

Finally planned out my illustration, here's a thumbnail sketch. C&C's are welcome. I tried to block in a scene where Kaminari engages in combat with other ninja clansmen at a sci-fi city's rooftops
PS: will add that sci-fi into the background later

Jan '20
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looking awesome, i think the point of the pyramid throwing weapon needs to face us a little more to match arm perspective

Jan '20

Reply to

Tesat

That's great! Very effective composition! I would suggest to tilt it even a bit more, I think it would enhance the dynamism :smile:

Jan '20

Reply to

rgdraw

thanks man :smile: , you mean I should tilt the character right? yeah I thought of it before but forgot about it :grin:

Jan '20

You're welcome! And yes exactly that :smile:

10 days later

Jan '20

What you see now is basically my game plan and of course there will be changes, I did a line drawing over my character and now I'm gonna draw the rest or at least block them in a little bit more solid and I then will post it.