Okydoky. So I roughed out the environment. Seems to work. Lighting is going to be interesting with a lamp on the wall behind the goblin, a light in the foreground to the left (off camera), a truck fire at the back and maybe a couple of residual fires around the busted barrier...so best I make it night . Now to work on a another character firing down the alley to the right. If I am completely off please let me know as this is the only art I have done since Art War 3 and that was the first I had done in quite a few years.
Mmmm. So here I am at the pre-xmas pause point. I have added the second character. The other characters from my stake in the sand are irrelevant now as I have settled on an alleyway scene. I have to say I am fairly happy with the composition noting that the details aren't there yet. I need to spend some time working out how to do clean lines and paint or is it just paint? Thanks for stopping by...laters…
Ooooops. I realised I needed to move the second character so I can have a discharge from the lever action rifle. In other words I want the current position to be the kick back just after the shot. I should also add I am leaving everything fairly transparent so you can see how I have built it up and to make it easier to respond to any feedback. Been a blast so far. BTW if anyone has any good youtube links for painting that would be very much appreciated. Laters...again....
@serovero , @brandoncrampton1 ... thanks both. Yeah I did mix the layers up a bit 😊
You should work on your perspective, right now the perspective of the background doesn´t match his dynamic perspective.
this could help:
@wienkind ... you are right! It seems to be the barrier and sandbags that are out of kilter. I checked the remaining background perspective lines and they are about right. Now I just need to work out how’s to fix this issue....much appreciated advice. 🙏
@wienkind
Thanks for the feedback...I have enlarged the sandbags and fixed the perspective...plus had to get rid of the other side so I will have to have a think about this a bit further. I also picked up the vehicle in the background and changed the perspective and light around this. Tell me if I have missed something
I'm a bit late to your party here, I didn't really understand what your element was at first, if you painted some fire in the image it would definitely read better (considering the only indicators are the gun and hat) but saying that it's a nice refreshing take which I haven't seen in any of the others yet.