Whoah this is awesome man! Not composition feedback, but the piece would harmonise better if there wasn't so much full saturation in the piece. Perhaps if you toned it down in a way to bring attention to his own saturation it would help. It's pretty but quite hard on the eyes. The way you've painted the body is looking really appealing
Thanks for the advice ! I agree it is necessary to dim the colors ...
I decided to change the composition , in this version the character will be more understandable, also edited the character design itself. Removed the extra armor . Once I do the spirit of fire that huge armor is too much , perhaps will stop there for this version , I will try to work out . At first I didn't really know what I wanted to do for the contest .That's why I have such different sketches. Now I'm more confident about what I want to draw .
i personally like 3
I like 2, the composition and the camera angle looks amazing! Very dinamic
Thank you very much! I am only concerned that the character is not very readable character ... . I'll work on it.
I think 3 is the best especially with the light blue secondary color makes it stand out a lot !
I personally like 1 or 3, the design in the first is a nice development, reminds me a lot of Devilman Crybaby, great show
I will be very happy to hear your suggestions for work development, criticism or advice
I think background wise you should use a different colour. It goes well with the fire but it throws the value balance of the piece out of whack and makes focusing on the fire a bit harder. Fire always looks better on a darker background of course, but that's one suggestion. Pose wise he's quite stiff, the gesture and action of his arms don't match that of his torso or legs and it looks a bit awkward - like he's fighting with his arms but his body is relaxed you know? The rendering is coming along though, and the armour looks super cool!
Oh that second version looks really awesome! The added swords and purple clouds around the edge really gives it a nice atmosphere
Thank you, I will still work on the environment and the figure (armor) of the character
Are you not sure on which composition to go for? I like the one you posted yesterday that has the purple clouds on, though if you wanted to make it more dynamic you could always try posing his legs, and the lion looks epic too! That would definitely be a challenge to paint but it would look amazing
Thanks! Yes, I want to make a more dynamic composition, I try different options
