Jan '20

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aypersc

Thank you very much! I am only concerned that the character is not very readable character ... . I'll work on it.

Jan '20

I personally like 1 or 3, the design in the first is a nice development, reminds me a lot of Devilman Crybaby, great show

Jan '20

I will be very happy to hear your suggestions for work development, criticism or advice

Jan '20

I think background wise you should use a different colour. It goes well with the fire but it throws the value balance of the piece out of whack and makes focusing on the fire a bit harder. Fire always looks better on a darker background of course, but that's one suggestion. Pose wise he's quite stiff, the gesture and action of his arms don't match that of his torso or legs and it looks a bit awkward - like he's fighting with his arms but his body is relaxed you know? The rendering is coming along though, and the armour looks super cool!

Jan '20

Oh that second version looks really awesome! The added swords and purple clouds around the edge really gives it a nice atmosphere

Jan '20

Thank you, I will still work on the environment and the figure (armor) of the character

Jan '20

Are you not sure on which composition to go for? I like the one you posted yesterday that has the purple clouds on, though if you wanted to make it more dynamic you could always try posing his legs, and the lion looks epic too! That would definitely be a challenge to paint but it would look amazing

Jan '20

Thanks! Yes, I want to make a more dynamic composition, I try different options

Jan '20

4 is definetly better. Did you get help with it? I noticed a stark difference in style from the previous others.
Also remember to read the rules and post info about yourself like your name, email, etc. :wink:

Jan '20

Thanks! This sketch was made by myself, I just worked with a brush on one layer, usually I place all the details on layers in photoshop . Where do I place my data (email , name )? I have everything in my profile.