Edit : I realized that it would be a too much of a change if you are going to change your design to my opinion. Like I said, I liked your design as it was. I would like to apologize for me interfering.. I think I could sound like I was giving you a critique or something which I didn't really mean to.
Personally, I like the thicker one better, but in my just little opinion, I would like even more volume. I am thinking something like this,
But I have to say it really is my personal taste, and I like your design as it was too. So if you are unsure about the design, then I think it is always better to go with your decision. I just like seeing other's progress and learning a lot, thanks for listening!