ART WAR I 2D I Transcending Robot I Aeguilrod

aegilrod 2017-02-24 07:08:51 UTC #21

More poses, I've still got some more in mind, but gotta sleep a bit now.

aegilrod 2017-02-24 21:58:48 UTC #22

The two final candidates:

It's like the same but one is flying and the other isn't hehe.
Quite pumped up for this!

Pd: Would really really appreciate help choosing.

berrysquare 2017-02-24 22:54:28 UTC #23

I like the one flying. You can see the legs better and also the woman. Its nice to see a gentle woman next to a strong hero. Just one thing... the way the woman bends. Atleast a chin should be seen. Or make the woman more bent in angle that we can see her whole body amd hair hangin in the air. Allthough it would look more interesting if the woman would rest her head on the chest of the hero. I guess experimwnr with ideas

aegilrod 2017-02-24 23:15:14 UTC #24

Thank you for the feedback! And yeah you are right she will be a robot though, still gotta work on her. Her head resting is a nice idea, thank you!

milanbourgeon 2017-02-24 23:21:55 UTC #25

Second one is cool ! I like the story , and its the most dynamic ! maybe he could take her in her two arms, would be more romantics, like Cloud held aerith in FF7 for example, with legs more close for a dignified look. Just my 2 cent !

aegilrod 2017-02-24 23:29:01 UTC #26

Thank really appreciate it!, the reason it's one arm is because I wanna show the glowing hand in action, and as a way to protect her from the assault, but yeah I'll consider her position more.
I'm thinking of giving that second one a little bit perspective from below, like the first one, idk.

berrysquare 2017-02-25 18:33:22 UTC #27

When do you think you will be able to finish the illustration? I am looking forward to your progress!

aegilrod 2017-02-25 20:37:56 UTC #28

Umm I'm planning to skip sleeping for the incoming days xD IMUSTFINISH! , and thank you very much for the interest!

aegilrod 2017-02-25 20:40:08 UTC #29

UPDATE!
New pose!
Like this one better, took the suggestions, although both arms could not be possible xD Want to hear what you guys think.

Gotta keep workin!

berrysquare 2017-02-25 20:44:05 UTC #30

Haha, ok. I was thinking I might have to skip sleep tomorrow xD.
But the new pose looks much better!! I like it. Maybe the flying robots face could be turned towards the bullets? Would look logical. But everything else I like

aegilrod 2017-02-25 20:46:00 UTC #31

It's kinda looking at them xD if he had eyes it would be noticeable, but in his case his whole head registers info, so technically he is seeing them xD, it's like a mid turn from the girl to the bullets, but I'll try to make it more noticeable, thank you!
Maybe making some kind of eye via the glow in his head.

berrysquare 2017-02-25 20:47:42 UTC #32

Good point! yeah the glow would work I think

aegilrod 2017-02-25 20:50:32 UTC #33

I'm torn between this pairs of wings, ummm...

aegilrod 2017-02-26 12:40:01 UTC #34

Update!

Wings not final yet

aegilrod 2017-02-26 15:33:40 UTC #35

Refining

Send food please

aegilrod 2017-02-27 06:38:30 UTC #36

Progress

malcom 2017-02-27 07:06:05 UTC #37

Really interesting composition look forward to the final. Looking good so far. I'll see what I can do about the food lol Here's some protein.

aegilrod 2017-02-27 07:06:41 UTC #38

Lol thank very much!

berrysquare 2017-02-27 09:47:56 UTC #39

Awesome! What color will the background be?

aegilrod 2017-02-27 16:10:26 UTC #40

Mmm good question xD I dont really know yet, maybe it'll be at dusk, or maybe just a golden ambience overall...gotta experiment