ARTWAR 2 | 2D | Ryder | AleckSandrs

[alecksandrs]

@badboys9805
Feedback is very precious to me! Thank you for attention.
Looks like No.3 is very popular so far, gonna expand and explore it's design further more. Idea of exaggerated long arms has been popping in my head lately.
Gonna make some more thumbnails that would be more consistent.

TY again!

[ipos]

Hello, Alecksandrs!

I like the dynamics in your first sketches. For me personally, the first (1) variant is more attractive. But the weapon is better in (5). And variants number (4) and (6) have a great idea for the main illustration. So, I think that «the combination works better» (as always). And I also can give an advice for you to make (6)+(5) variants in strong perspective (like a splash art for example).

Very... dynamic start. You should keep this feeling in next stages of your w.i.p.

Good luck!

[alecksandrs]

@posashkov
Your feedback is very appreciated! Aha, I kinda like weapon in number 5 as well, gonna dig in this idea more, but later I'm gonna do thumbnails of the weapon designs only, right now I'm focusing on making overall theme of my champion, (as well as his whole design) and I'm aiming whole theme to be more animalistic, wild, brutal, badass and dynamic, so for final splash art I won't do something static, I would like to fill it with action, so gonna aim towards something like (4).

So yeah, this whole project gonna have a lot of steps in various designs. (sadly, I have my exams first, gotta finish 'em before going all in with this project

Again, thank you for your feedback!
Gonna keep it up!

[rgdraw]

Hey! So let's see what we have here: A warrior with a chainsaw sword
It's quite bad ass! It reminds me of a concept I've seen in tutorial made by Anthony Jones (If you don't know the guy go check him right now) where he was showing how to create concept and the idea was a woman with a big sword she could ride
But back to your work, your sketches works great, you can makes something good from all of them, so good luck!

[rabbitrifles]

A Chainsaw Blade is one of the most genius weapon designs imo, and I LOVE ALL OF THESE SKETCHES. If I HAD to choose I’d say either 3 or 6, since they both seem like a very interesting dynamic. I’m excited for the development of this concept. Keep up the good work!

[alecksandrs]

Tomorrow...

[alecksandrs]

@rabbitrifles @rgdraw
BIG Thank you for admiration of this idea of mine! Stay tuned for updates, I got some free time!

[mdashow]

Great body sketch, and great post-apocalyptic vibe. Looking forward to seeing him fleshed out more with his huge sword!

[alecksandrs]

@mdashow
TY for your attention, good sir! Im still poking around themes and looks for him, this is just one of 10 fresh ideas for his outfit/theme. After that Im gonna do few for his left demonic arm, and then, I will do tons for his weapons, after dat Im gonna piece everything together in final concept art, and finally gonna do a splash art. Stay tuned for tomorrow! 🤘😎

[rgdraw]

Well, if you throw some Mad Max vibes into it this is gonna be even cooler!

[iEvgeni]

Nice sketches you have there

[eissa]

oh really love the mad max vibes .. it guess it will work well with the chainsaw weapon even more !!

[alecksandrs]

Oh well... I'M BACK!
And free from exams, finally! Now I can actually concentrate on this work!
Here are 10 sketches of his outfit (theme), that is going to be final, and I will pick one of those out to flesh it out in even more details! Since he has a giant chainsaw sword, that weights like 10+ tons, I figured that he probably needs less complicated metal on his torso and arms for better control and moving more freely.
Thats why I have marked those variants, that I liked the most, but Im curious to see suggestions of other skilled people! So I will let this hang in here for some time, and keep myself busy by making sketches of the other stuff (like his face, demonic left arm, his sword).

I will make sure to keep myself busy for all the free time I have during holydays (until 12.02.2018).

Im starving for your critiques and suggestions!
Thank you!
Keep it cool!

[ant_hero]

I really like how 8 looks, but if you think of going more on a junkyard demon side I think 6 would be outstanding for that.

[mdashow]

I think 8 is a good choice. Nice and clean and not overboard. 2 is similarly nice. On 4 the arm seems a bit overdone, but the rest is clean and works. I think the whole I've-got-a-tree-branch-for-an-arm thing could work if you make that you're main theme, but it seems at odds with the post apocalyptic vibe, not to mention the idea of a chainsaw as a weapon.
Good luck with whatever you choose!

[ipos]

Too many variants for choosing, but I like 4 and 5 most of all.

You can also combine some elements, textures and cool details from other variants to add them to the main image. (for example, the holes from v2 add to 5th; the thorns from v6; t-shirt, belt and scarf from v10; I also like the bags from v2 and belt elements and pockets from v6). You can also add some bandage on the left hand.

I predict here a good illustration with all this stuff.

I wish you good luck and patience.

[alecksandrs]

@mdashow you are probably right, my friend! Simple design might just be the most practical one, also your suggestion of "I've-got-a-tree-branch-for-an-arm thing" just gave me another awesome idea of an ENT who got corrupted by darkness, so he foun and fused his arm with a giant chainsaw-sword since it would be the most effective weapon against his own kin xD
But, Im planning to stick with the idea in mind, so yeah, its still awesome tho!
I do like v8, and as @posashkov suggested I will combine some minor but powerful design elements from other variants with the 8th one as the main one.
Also! I never thought about bandages on his devil-arm, tho it can be a very powerful detail!

Thank you guys for feedback! I will be sure not to disappoint yours and my own expectations!
Keep it cool!

[painterx11]

Looks like a great concept and the stylized effect is really appealing. Advice that always works for me is when in doubt always error in the way of cool or good looking, even if its technically wrong. That's why silhouettes are a great way to work, you have no idea what all the edges mean but you get an idea, ultimately its the shape thats dope, not the anatomy. If it looks good, go with it. Have fun drawing!

[alecksandrs]

Ok!
So before I go sleepin, I did something like this... Basic sketch of his generic expression and demonic arm (that obviously needs more work). Will start working on it tomorrow!

And here comes the part of me being very nervous and unsure about my next steps, unlike lines etc, I never realy had any professional experience on working with shading, light, rendering and most emportantly for me, colors. I feel so unsure about all those important aspects that actualy form complete illustration, I simply don't know the right way to do it good for someone as unskilled as I am (and often I just end up not doing anything at all.)

I could realy use a word of advice about all this stuff that I have mentioned (especialy color.)
Thank you!!

[rgdraw]

This is getting more and more interesting keep it up like that!