ARTWAR 2 | 3D | Twin Blade | Malcom

[malcom]

Name: Malcom Ponder
Email: malcx100@gmail.com
Twitter: @Phantom_MJP
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Website: Artstation/malcom
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Dark Side is my choice. For now
Last year I didn't enter 3d because I didn't know much. Now I have slightly more knowledge so it time to try my hand at a full 3d character...Hopefully. Any and all feedback will be welcomed as this will hopefully be my first fully finished 3d character ever.

[malcom]

Sketches - really sick so heres what I have for now
Might go with the light side
Originally this was a dark character but i'll make changes in the future maybe.

[malcom]

new sketch crappy anatomy. I'll fix it in another version or in the 3D

I had a lot of fun with this. Lots of happy accidents throughout the process.

[Mocart]

looks nice. but actually i like the first sketches more.
i dont think she would be able to move her arms in the second sketch

[malcom]

Are you referring to the character with the shorter jacket or the long coat jacket thing(I should know but I don't lol)
Thanks for your feedback.

[Mocart]

the long jacket thing

[mrjar0]

In my opinion so far the first sketch the long coat version looks best. She gives off the feeling of a warrior. Strong yet elegant. You can practically feel her personality.
The other versions might have more details, but they feel more like a generic grunt and not a mighty warrior

[malcom]

Thanks a lot for the feedback. I heard the same from other as well. Sketch 1 is the winner. Going to modify a few things but it'll mostly be the same character.

[javi_oses]

I really like the overall feeling of the character. Really cool armor. Cant wait to see some clay work ^^.

[malcom]

After I finish the sketch, I'll be making the base mesh. So something soon hopefully.

[malcom]

Just a sketch
Gonna start making my base mesh off of this to not waste anymore time. Going with the first sketch. Not sure if I'll keep the visor but its cool for now.

[jutunis]

This is looking super awesome! I think the visor would be a cool addition to keep. It provides an interesting change in material and color to the face. It would definitely help bring attention that area.

[malcom]

Thank you. After a good nights rest, I like the visor as well.

[ironicgame]

I also like the visor part and really love the shoes design. The only thing that I would change is the shoulder pad. Not sure it make sense with the rest. may be try a few shape on these. Solide concept overall ! grats

[sarawildeart]

Great concept! Futuristic-elvish almost

[malcom]

@ironicgame thanks a lot for the feedback. I/ll play with some more shapes after I finish creating a base mesh for this girl.
@sarawildeart Glad you like it. She does still feel more evil than good. Might just make the blue lines red or purple or something. I don't know. Suggestions always welcomed.

[mr_dessin]

That is very cool stuffs man !
Your legs are usually very nice....and shoes design

What I'm not very sure about is her shoulder pads (sort of ?)
But overall the composition is working very well !

[sarawildeart]

Might just be her neutral pose right now that's making her feel like she could be an enforcer of some sort. Once she's got a bit more dynamism in her expression and pose I'm sure it'll be more clear.

[malcom]

@mr_dessin thanks. Shoulder pads will be worked on.
@sarawildeart Your right. I didn't think about that. For fun I might draw up some poses. That can help with the direction a bit more....BUT the darkside is strong

[Cybuster89]

It would be dope if you find a way to make the glasses broken, like she dodged a bullet that deflected off her glasses or something.