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Mocart 2018-01-14 14:34:58 UTC #24

tanks for the feedback guys !
@malcom tried out the blue one thanks. really like it
also tried out the dark side :D

rgdraw 2018-01-14 14:53:58 UTC #25

Those are great too! Good luck for choosing only one, they all would work fine, so you can't go wrong!

mdashow 2018-01-14 15:15:20 UTC #26

A white & gold combination does not really say "dark side" (although the black leggings are nice.) Both 2 & 3 totally read as dark side... How would those black leggings look on them?

Mocart 2018-01-14 15:25:22 UTC #27

thanks for the feedback.
yeah the gold and white one is obviously not dark sorry for that
already tried darker leggins. lighter ones look more intersting i think

Mocart 2018-01-17 18:24:24 UTC #28

wanted to see her in a pose before starting the illustration. noticed

she couldnt move her hands ... sooooo I changed some things but now i can move on

malcom 2018-01-17 19:20:30 UTC #29

This is still a cool design and the line work is awesome. I really like the style here. I personally liked the hoodie and the cloth flap thing she had but this is still cool as well.
I look forward to see how you do the illustration.

grafik 2018-01-17 19:24:43 UTC #30

Quite a change from the thumbnails! Great to see all the development, I like a lot the hoodie design.

rgdraw 2018-01-17 23:43:40 UTC #31

Wow! Beautiful work! I already said it, but i love your line work!

Pregium 2018-01-18 13:25:56 UTC #32

this is epic!, look at those polished lines!

NicoK 2018-01-21 20:44:54 UTC #33

Really awesome! Definitly my favourite so far. I hope this is not too much to ask but I would love to hear some feedback from you. Your design skills are just soooo on point.

evehartman 2018-01-21 20:48:10 UTC #34

Haha, you design your characters really well All of them! Last one is my favourite though, with the colour combination of 1.

Mocart 2018-01-23 15:35:12 UTC #35

thanks for the feedback guys !

gave her a twist for the dark side and a mount hope you like it

mdashow 2018-01-23 18:00:54 UTC #36

Nice shot of her on the back of her mount! It has a great flow to it. Watch out for tangents, like her scarf to the mount's back, her knee to its shoulder, and her toe to the line of its belly. Also, compositionally, you might consider something more in the lower right to guide the eye back around to the left and towards the mount's face and the hero. And adding some more room at the top so that her head isn't so close to the edge of the canvas.
Anyhow, great work so far. Did you ever pick a color scheme?

evehartman 2018-01-23 19:58:04 UTC #37

She looks fierce! Composition feels a bit odd atm (like @mdashow already said), though I would position them a bit more to down to the right and increase the size of the soldiers. Does that help?

rgdraw 2018-01-24 13:16:37 UTC #38

Awesome! She has a badass mount! Nice work and I agree with @mdashow too you might have to tweek a bit some stuff to get a better composition, but keep up the great work man!

Pregium 2018-01-24 15:25:23 UTC #39

really diggin your style, great art bravo

eissa 2018-01-24 15:55:18 UTC #40

really love evey thing !! the line art is so clean !

Mocart 2018-01-28 19:31:00 UTC #41

thanks for the feedback guys ! really appreciate it ! never actually tried to do a final illustration so i have a lot of trouble with composition.
@mdashow never heard of that tangents thing before, so BIG thanks for that. helped a lot

but honestly i started to hate my character and decided to start something new because had some time today the new character is definitly on the light side. hope the composition is better this time. tried to apply the stuff you told me earlier about

evehartman 2018-01-28 19:39:29 UTC #42

I do love your composition on this one!

rgdraw 2018-01-28 19:39:43 UTC #43

You seemed to have the "I'm never happy about my work" syndrome xD
It looks nice, you have a great flow in your composition and your character looks bad ass
So keep up the good work and try to keep your character this time x)
Good luck !