thanks for the feedback guys ! really appreciate it ! never actually tried to do a final illustration so i have a lot of trouble with composition.
@mdashow never heard of that tangents thing before, so BIG thanks for that. helped a lot
but honestly i started to hate my character and decided to start something new because had some time today 
the new character is definitly on the light side. hope the composition is better this time. tried to apply the stuff you told me earlier about
