Background painting

[liko]

Hi all,

I am currently working on this piece, and I feel a bit stuck. Are my colors right or is it dull ? There is still a lot of stuff to polish, like the foliage on the wall, and the trees, I am asking how I render them, If I polish them far or just a bit, more abstract.

What do you think guys ? Please don't hesitate to give me some cricticism and don't be affraid of being sharp

[thomastarkotta]

Hi,

i like your backyard and the mood. It fells like a warm and calm summer night in south europe.
Here are some advices from my perspective:

[liko]

Hi man,

Thank you for your comment. I forgot to share the final version... Nice idea about the wall, I'll keep in mind for the next one. Yeah you're right about the table, I add something on the final version and same for the grass.
About the door, I didn't notice, but yeah make sense. Thank I'll correct it !

Here is the final version :

And you can find more, like the concept of the house in my portfolio :

https://www.artstation.com/artwork/A9O0dm

Thanks for your help !

[thomastarkotta]

You're welcome
I like your conceptart on your artstation page. What's the goal of your personal project?

[liko]

Thanks !

It's for a comic book, I made the concept to see exactly where the action will take place, where to place camera etc.