A couple of gesture + figure from this morning.
Went back over the two on the right trying to feel out more depth as the gesture lines (black) seem a bit flat. Been focusing on 30"-1' mainly as my brain seems to get it's wires crossed with short expressive lines.
Figure is better, but lower legs/feet don't seem grounded, seems to be floating.
Welcome back!
Dang, that's an intense painting! Pretty cool pose and color scheme. The fabric folds look real good
I think where the hat meets the head could use some defining. Might be kinda hard to do with a conical hat at that angle though - maybe painting in where the straps connect to the hat?
Overall it looks badass!
thank you for your time Grant. I picked up Aaron Blaise' course on Fabric/folds a while back and it really helped me with them.
Yeah I did sort of just lose the hat/hair in shadow, mainly because I didn't love the hat hah. I will let it sit for a few days and try to come back with a fresh view and see if I can improve it. Detailing the connection of the straps sounds like a good place to start, thanks!
I've gotten fairly proficient at doing "person posing" but I definitely feel out of my comfort zone with multiple characters in the same piece (especially balancing the layout / focal points)
When I was a kid I remember being stunned at some of Larry Elmore's Dragonlance book covers, loved how he incorporated multiple characters on a relatively small area. So the plan is to do some master studies focusing on that. Going to limit the time, start with ~90 minutes and slowly get closer to an hour, just to keep me from getting too much into detailing.
First one last night. Pretty sure this was Dragons of Spring Dawning.