I can see some definitive improvement over the set, so all in all you are going in a good direction.
There's a couple of things I noticed:
To add onto what I wrote onto the image: No need to draw in the peak that's produced by the ribcage protruding. In my oppinion that's a detail that's hindering the flow. Nice long lines symbolize the stretching that takes place in that area, contrasted by the pinching on the back.
Also, while blocking out the major shapes is not an error, I personally find that it makes my gestures more stiff.
That being said, gestures are a great place to experiment. Try all kinds of different approaches and find out what works for you.
thank you, I will try
I haven't been able to do much digital art lately since track just started but I've still been sketching a lot. This is some of my digital work lately as always critique is welcomed.
Dang Cody! These are really good! Great work, keep it up!
thank you that really means a lot to me. I'll keep improving
I know I haven't been to active lately but I've been drawing consistently in my sketchbook everyday. Im getting more used to using a digital art style and this is my 1 point perspective that I got done a while back critique is always appreciated.
Heya,
I like the theme and storytelling quite a lot. There's a couple of issues I see though:
Careful with your horizontal and vertical line. It's especially noticeable in 1-point-perspective when they are off, as they should be perfectly parallel instead.
The backwall is incorrect. When trying to find the plane of the back wall (indicated by the blue arrows) you'll find that the size of the plane would be about what I painted in orange. I've also drawn in where your backwall would sit, if it were the size you drew it.
So basically, your room under the walkway would be inset into the backwall, but the beams on top indicate otherwise.
A way to avoid this is to follow the convergent, horizontal or vertical lines from points in space where the position is known (for example the corner or edges of the room.
Thank you very much for the critique, I never noticed the things you pointed out until now. although it did look a bit funny to me and I couldn't figure out why. But now I know and will apply this to later drawings, thanks.
25 days later
Hi Cody.. it's been a while since your last post, I hope everything is good?? 
yeah, I'm all good I've just been really strung up lately. My schedule was getting really overbearing since I'm doing track with school right now and also trying to balance that with my daily schedule was all a little too much. so I decided to step back a rebalance things and it seems that things might be getting back to normal. But I didn't stop drawing in my sketchbook so at least iv'e been slowly improving. So I should start posting again soon
10 days later
I'm finally back, I took a break from lessons while I sorted out life stuff but I never stoped drawing. I hope that I can get back into it and am looking forward to joining my fellow students once again. here is one of my assignments. 
I also couldn't quite figure out how to make a brush in procreate so any tips are welcomed.
Glad to see you back! Hope things are going well! Keep up the good work. I am not familiar with procreate unfortunately.
13 days later
I finally got around to doing some three point perspective.
Looking good Cody! Keep it up!
yoww cody!! glad to know you're doing art again! 
really nice perspective you got there..
Keep it up..
why thank you, I'm working on my 2 point perspective assignment right now since I never did it correctly so I should be posting that soon.
