you can actually paste the view file here so people can view it as intended.
As far as feedback goes, I recommend adding more detail. Beat up the book and the materials a bit more. The diamonds and the gold bits still feel to perfect.
I also recommend looking at how other artist treat the materials to get an idea on how to get an more appealing look. I do enjoy to colors and the chuckyness of the book though. I has that holy magic or royal magic feel to it.
