Critique/ feedback wanted on work

[jack_cook_2020]

This is a sketch I’ve done in Procreate ready for flat colour, I was wondering if anyone had any improvements, feedback, stuff about posing or anatomy, absolutely anything really. (This sketch is just the figure but is going to be a witch on a broomstick.)
Thank you!

[Yasukanagi]

Why is she naked?

[malcom]

Not a bad start. There are a few things that do stick out tome like the hands, the clavicle bone and the right boob. The right boob should be a little higher because she is raising her arm up. I really like the pose and the gesture of it. May I ask if you were using a reference? The face is good as well. You need eye balls This is a good start. I look forward to the next step in the process.
@okellymarc I could be wrong but @jack_cook_2020 might be doing everything step by step which is a good thing. Making sure the anatomy is good before moving onto clothing is great because you'll have a better understanding of whats going on underneath all the clothing and how the physics an stuff will work.

[jack_cook_2020]

I agree @malcom thanks a lot for the feedback. I didn’t use one picture for reference but I got the pose from a black clip art shilouette of a witch and then used a couple different pictures of a torso and stuff to help me. If you keep checking back, I’ll keep you posted on the progress 😄

Here’s the crappy first sketch

And here’s how the face is getting on actually.

Sorry for such a heavy post, I’m happy someone’s interested in my art 😂

[malcom]

Good start on the face. The ears are a bit small not that I look at this again. Keep it up.