Destroy me and make me better

[Zorbius15]

Crits. Getting back into the graphic art/coloring game Looking to do more t-shirt design/ graphic design / comic art, not so much concept art. Thanks! .

[moirae]

Clean, clear linework like this needs clean colouring, all the textures and brushmarks in the end one actually hides the line art. I think you're better off stopping at stage three, maybe adding a little light shading and leaving it at that.

[Zorbius15]

Hmm good call or maybe less saturated colors? Big influences for me are CreatureBox and Brett Parson (Blitzcadet) Tank Girl illustrations. Thank you for the feedback!

[lmx]

I'd say the first one is the best actually ! You lost a bit of the perspective starting at the second one - when linetracing - , we can see that on the right side of the face (eye and eyebrow). Easy fix Don't forget to be aware of any fundamentals when you're transferring a drawing to a more refined one.

I'd say the same as before, 3rd drawing with correct perspective would be good with some flat shadows. I like the 4th rendering but it's messy and the blood texture is flattening your piece a bit.

Good luck with that

[Zorbius15]

Ohh good points, thank you so much!