11 days later
Clean, clear linework like this needs clean colouring, all the textures and brushmarks in the end one actually hides the line art. I think you're better off stopping at stage three, maybe adding a little light shading and leaving it at that.
Hmm good call or maybe less saturated colors? Big influences for me are CreatureBox and Brett Parson (Blitzcadet) Tank Girl illustrations. Thank you for the feedback!
25 days later
I'd say the first one is the best actually ! You lost a bit of the perspective starting at the second one - when linetracing - , we can see that on the right side of the face (eye and eyebrow). Easy fix 
Don't forget to be aware of any fundamentals when you're transferring a drawing to a more refined one.
I'd say the same as before, 3rd drawing with correct perspective would be good with some flat shadows. I like the 4th rendering but it's messy and the blood texture is flattening your piece a bit.
Good luck with that
22 days later
Ohh good points, thank you so much!
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