Environment scene, need help/suggestions

[dindunuffin]

Hello all

I had an idea from one of my recent trips, I want to do an interior shot of a cave, with some characters exploring on a sunny day. I've always wanted to do a 3 point perspective shot since i rarely do a shot like it.

Here is the current progress :

[chicken]

Hey There Partner!

Looks freakin' amazing! Wish I had half the talent, plus I love this concept. You said you this was based on a recent trip? Where is this based off of? Kinda looks like Africa or Australia

That being said (and you don't have to listen to me since im brand new to painting), I am a bit lost on your focal point. Due to contrast, I'd say its the sky right now, but I think you mean for the character to be. If I am mistaken then disregard my reply XD

Anyway, I just did a quick 5 sec paintover of what I think should be the remedy for this

Other than that I think its pretty damn perfect.

[dindunuffin]

Thanks for the critique man! Unfortunately when i tried to save it, it crashed in the middle so its corrupted. I do have the JPEG left that i saved before hand but other than that, I will try fix the contrast a bit more.

Its a recent trip in Scotland, was travelling and exploring a cave, also tried to mix a bit of African culture into it!