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Hi guys,
This is a project I've been working on. It's not done but it is in the final stages, though that doesn't mean I won't consider any major changes. I would appreciate any feedback.
Thanks
nice composition...bring up more colour variation to the character,search for a pose reference, on the internet for example,you should look over the shadow areas again, cause the char appears flat
What throws me off a bit is that you don't use lines in most of the painting, but you use sharp black line for the nose. I think if you tried shading the face instead of using lines, it would look much more coherent and 'finished'.Nice character!
Another tip is to not shade the skin with black. It makes it look weird, and muddy.
Thanks for the feedback,I still need to add the light from the background onto the character, maybe that will help with the color variation but I'll look into that and fixing the shadows.
Thanks!
Yeah, I need to fix the skin overall, maybe change some tones.
Thanks for the critique
I see what you mean, I'll definitely fix that.
Hey William, awesome work you have here really digging the composition like others have pointed out. So lets dig right in shall we? Something I noticed first that I haven't seen others talking about is that cool rune looking symbol on the wall behind your character! The glow from that symbol on the wall should reverberate on to her armor and have some type of rim light affect! so with my critique with your work the main focus is upon.... you guessed it... lighting! make sure your utilizing that light source you've created! I know sycra has amazing videos on light and shadow and it would definitely level up your artwork. ( upon further inspection I see you've realized a lot of this already so sorry for that, however sometimes to learn even more you must unlearn what you have learned.) Good Luck!
Hi exofley, I really appreciate the feedback. I'll be sure to check out those videos.Thanks!
