FINAL | ART WAR 2 | 2D | Firefly | Artyom Malkin

[thespaxer]

Name: Artyom Malkin
Email : thespaxer@gmail.com
Artstation: https://www.artstation.com/makinart
Facebook : https://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100008770534563
Theme - Light
Adel,The light bringer

[thespaxer]

BIO:
Adel the Light bringer. In her first life, Adele was a ballerina, giving a storm of emotions and inspiration to everyone who saw her in a gentle dance and everyone who knew her was proud of it. Unfortunately that life had a bad ending, she died young. During the third world war, the theater in which she danced for injured military ,was bombed. Her second life is the continuation of the first one,in which she is a powerful spirit that maintains light in the minds of people and gives hope to the forgotten and abandoned worlds. The higher powers endowed her with this gift and now this is all that she lives for, finds doomed worlds and gives them hope

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[thespaxer]

Here is some Design variation

[Gil_Ascher]

hey! i love the backstory and your idea, the dseigns i like most are 2,3 and 6 and something about the top of the first one looks interesting cant wait to see how this goes! good luck!

[evehartman]

Great backstory and great designs so far! I love the laurels so I would incline more towards design 2 and 6

[thespaxer]

Thank you so much) 6 is my favourite so far

[thespaxer]

Thx a lot for your comment,I think I will push 6th variant to the final)

[thespaxer]

Here is some color variation ,which one do you like the most?

[evehartman]

I have a preference for three, the earthy tones stand out best. Maby add a soft gradient to the fabric of the dress (as you did in design one?)

[thespaxer]

Hey,sounds reasonable) thank you for advice a lot

[thespaxer]

I keep working on the topic pretty hard, here is the face of the character ( not the final version , and yes I know that hair looks terrible=) ) How do you think, should i put feathers on her cheeks or shouldn't ?

[evehartman]

Ooh this is interesting! I am a bit conflicted though, althouhg the markings on her face give her a more though look, I feel they she loses some of her femininity (which would be totally fine if that is what you are going for!)

[thespaxer]

Do you want to say that without feathers she looks more femenine?

[evehartman]

I would think so, but only the feathers on her chin (the ones in her eyebrows make her look fierce). But mine is just one opinion, if you feel that I am talking jibberish you should discard my comment

[thespaxer]

No, I think it make sense, you are not the only person who thinks this way

[thespaxer]

Hey Guys, When I finally chose design and colors I move on to finish the concept and here is WIP.Later I'm planning to do her back view .What do you think?

[frankenstejin]

Great backstory, sketches and design! It's so interesting how you guys started.
I'm not sure she can dance in her skirt like a ballerina ^^

[sanguine]

I like the design; especially the sleeves. Maybe she needs some warmer colors? Can't wait to see how this one turns out!

[thespaxer]

Here goes the finished concept of my character=) I decided to change the pose and drew her back view. Also made some minor changes of design. Gonna do the illustration soon

[thespaxer]

In my opinion , making of an illustration is my weak point and I'm not good at it and this challenge is the right time to work my butt off to push my skills ,this is what Im going to achieve. Here are some dirty compositions.The idea is that the ballerina using her force to destroy her dark enemies with the help of power vortex. Which one do you like most? What can I improve? Would love to hear your opinion