FINAL | ART WAR 2 | 2D | Firefly | Artyom Malkin

thespaxer 2017-12-28 12:21:40 UTC #15

No, I think it make sense, you are not the only person who thinks this way

thespaxer 2017-12-30 22:07:20 UTC #16

Hey Guys, When I finally chose design and colors I move on to finish the concept and here is WIP.Later I'm planning to do her back view .What do you think?

frankenstejin 2017-12-31 02:19:39 UTC #17

Great backstory, sketches and design! It's so interesting how you guys started.
I'm not sure she can dance in her skirt like a ballerina ^^

sanguine 2017-12-31 06:15:44 UTC #18

I like the design; especially the sleeves. Maybe she needs some warmer colors? Can't wait to see how this one turns out!

thespaxer 2018-01-08 15:26:43 UTC #19

Here goes the finished concept of my character=) I decided to change the pose and drew her back view. Also made some minor changes of design. Gonna do the illustration soon

thespaxer 2018-01-08 23:04:09 UTC #20

In my opinion , making of an illustration is my weak point and I'm not good at it and this challenge is the right time to work my butt off to push my skills ,this is what Im going to achieve. Here are some dirty compositions.The idea is that the ballerina using her force to destroy her dark enemies with the help of power vortex. Which one do you like most? What can I improve? Would love to hear your opinion

Tesat 2018-01-09 00:27:35 UTC #21

1 and 3 looks nice, I think 1 would be better if you made the character appear closer

mdashow 2018-01-09 01:15:34 UTC #22

Lovely character design. i really like the detailed studies of the head above.
For layout, I lean towards the top two. The rules note that your illo should show at least 80% of the full character and 3 cuts off more than that. (Or you could pull the camera out.) 4 will be a challenge because of the high camera angle, and might not show off your character in her best light (ie it would be great to see the beautiful face better!)
Good luck whichever you choose!

thespaxer 2018-01-09 13:21:31 UTC #23

thanks for such detailed line of thoughts! I think it makea lot of sense, I will probably push 1st one to the final.

thespaxer 2018-01-11 14:43:21 UTC #24

Hey people, Here is the rough composition for my illustration .

thespaxer 2018-01-11 23:29:33 UTC #25

Work in Progress ,decided to change it a little bit

mdashow 2018-01-12 00:35:17 UTC #26

The overall layout feels like a good choice. The pose in the second-to-last post felt a lot more active. She felt like she was doing something. In this latest post, she feels more like she's just watching everyone. Still, good start. Good luck with it!

thespaxer 2018-01-14 11:13:18 UTC #27

WIP.Messed up with the character a few times,so I decided to add her a bit later

frankenstejin 2018-01-16 01:21:18 UTC #28

I agree with @mdashow, the pose in the very first sketch was little bit more dynamic. I like the red background. It looks very dangerous and could be a good contrast to the blue-ish character.

thespaxer 2018-01-18 20:55:23 UTC #29

Hey guys, don't have much spear time now,that's why Im posting updates so rarely ,Here is the progress so far,need to polish it a lot, hopefully in the end the result will be satisfying)

frankenstejin 2018-01-30 02:07:01 UTC #30

wow it looks great Keep it up!

thespaxer 2018-02-02 09:18:16 UTC #31

thank you,but I remade it again) will post the inal version soon)

frankenstejin 2018-02-03 01:06:06 UTC #32

Yeah I want see more

thespaxer 2018-02-18 20:34:08 UTC #33

Here is the final version) hope you will enjoy it!It was a struggle but fun)

kantan 2018-03-09 01:09:26 UTC #34

Nice composition ! but this face it's strange because the jaw is to big, this face should be closer i think