This is working a lot better. I see the face first which is a good thing. Hard to say what you can do with the sun. Maybe the darkness is engulfing the sun in darkness like how the venom symbiote in spiderman takes over someone. Maybe you can make the sun more dull which is something you kinda have going on here. You can have the darkness on the outside with seams of dark energy going towards the center. Just some ideas you can play around with. Keep up the good work.
