This is developing nicely. It's great how the foreground characters pop nicely from the background with the value contrast you've used. Raguel's head is getting a bit lost, though: You might consider making it lighter - it is white bone, after all! - but it's surrounded by that dark cape so some additional value contrast should make that a nice center of focus.
Also, a very minor point, but proper English would be "The Groom Who Dances," not "Dance." It's not about the art so I hope you don't mind my pointing that out.
Good luck finishing it! 
